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Smarmosaur
post Aug 3 2008, 08:21 PM
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obviously inspired by my love of the city.
all three photos are in new york city. credit to Scott Murphy and Patrick Batchelder
I originally wanted it to be a smallish header for a layout, but sort of turned out as a big one. I spruced up the text (it took me three hours to get simulate pressure to work) by adding the city skyline to the c in city, and adding the glowy lines. originally, only the blue one was there and I thought it wasn't enough. then I added the red one and now it feels like too much. shrug.gif
anyways. opinions/suggestions?

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Mickey
post Aug 4 2008, 12:52 PM
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Those photographs are incredible! I like the font, as well. I prefer the second one, though.

I agree with it being a little too busy around the text. You should try removing the red swirl under the text and change the font color to red. Either that or try adding a black shadow to the white text, because it's a bit hard to understand it. Other than that, it's amazing.

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post Aug 4 2008, 09:47 PM
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QUOTE(Anarchy @ Aug 4 2008, 12:52 PM) *
Those photographs are incredible! I like the font, as well. I prefer the second one, though.

I agree with it being a little too busy around the text. You should try removing the red swirl under the text and change the font color to red. Either that or try adding a black shadow to the white text, because it's a bit hard to understand it. Other than that, it's amazing.

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oo, thanks for the tip! I added a red glow to the text.

also, I changed the top photo. the other one sort of wasn't fitting. new photo credit: amazingnewyorkcity
 

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