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 Jul 9 2008, 01:53 PM
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 Melieized  Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,372 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 478,715  |
it's for a rap group. EDIT:i re-did the whole thing and came up with something totally different than the original. i hope people like it and the guy that requested it too! again, please be honest and if you have any suggestions, i'm all ears! |
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Jul 9 2008, 03:05 PM
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I don't like it. The background pattern doesn't match what you're trying to portray with this. It doesn't match the font, what the people are wearing, the whole "rap group" idea, anything.
Everything about this is dull - the colors are very bland, there's no kick, the guys seem to be just cut out of a picture and that's it. It's also a bit messy. If their name is "Infinite Dimensions," put it together. Your spacing doesn't work at all. Overall, it's not very aesthetically appealing. Because this is a rap group, instead of the floralesque background, I'd try something either grungy, urban, or just plain solid. The font is okay, but I'd work on adjusting it so it makes more sense. Make the picture of the guys a higher contrast. Add some effects so it's not so flat. |
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Melie what do you think? Jul 9 2008, 01:53 PM
schizo I think it looks decent. The arrangement and fonts... Jul 9 2008, 02:26 PM dreamstar7 Is their name "Infinite Dimensions"? If ... Jul 9 2008, 02:27 PM Melie so what ideas do you guys have for bg's and br... Jul 9 2008, 02:39 PM schizo Well, I personally don't think any brushes are... Jul 9 2008, 03:04 PM Melie well i got in touch with the group and they wanted... Jul 10 2008, 11:56 AM xXJenWearsPradaXx It needs something.... Do some effects to the pict... Jul 10 2008, 12:52 PM Insurmountable Since you want honestly, I'll be technical and... Jul 10 2008, 11:28 PM aaayotiffany i don't really like it. :\
like it doesn... Jul 11 2008, 11:07 AM Melie ok, so i took everyone's advice and came up wi... Jul 12 2008, 08:16 PM XTC I like that one better, but I can barely read the ... Jul 12 2008, 08:45 PM shenanigans I like the new one a lot more than the old one. Jul 12 2008, 09:39 PM Melie you know, i was working on this allllll day today ... Jul 12 2008, 09:43 PM SilentLaugh wow, that is a complete change. and i do think it ... Jul 12 2008, 10:03 PM Insurmountable Haha this looks exactly almost like a myspace I di... Jul 12 2008, 11:23 PM Melie check out the new image at the beginning of topic ... Jul 13 2008, 03:19 PM venti-anemoi MUCH better than your original.
Personally, I don... Jul 13 2008, 03:29 PM Tomates I like the second one MUCH better. Jul 13 2008, 04:28 PM schizo The new version looks fantastic. I've never be... Jul 13 2008, 06:02 PM ----- This looks a lot better. Jul 14 2008, 12:05 AM dosomethin888 You know, to be perfectly honest, Im an ameuture a... Jul 14 2008, 01:14 AM
xXJenWearsPradaXx I like it. but once again...
the pictures? they s... Jul 15 2008, 11:57 PM |
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