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 Jun 23 2008, 03:28 PM
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This is my first time ever making something like this, and I'd appreciate some feedback. I feel as if something is missing or off, but I'm not sure what it is. The only part that I'm completely satisfied with is the bird. I've only ever vectored little cartoons - never something that's supposed to look semi-realistic. If I'm not told that it's absolutely atrocious, I might make it into a layout.
Edit: I took some of your suggestions and changed it up a bit. All I really did was take away the ribbon and add some details to the branches. I'm not that fond of the flowers, but I think if I just work on them a bit, they'll look nice. Which do you like better? |
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Jun 24 2008, 04:09 PM
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The only problem I have with the flowers is that they're all exactly the same. Other than that, I think the flowers are fine. =]
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schizo Green Finch Jun 23 2008, 03:28 PM
emberfly I like everything except the purple and blue fade ... Jun 23 2008, 04:41 PM schizo Yeah, I wasn't too sure about those. I just wa... Jun 23 2008, 05:03 PM Relentless I like it. To be honest, I really like the colored... Jun 23 2008, 05:07 PM absinthe ^I agree. The thing that really sticks out to me (... Jun 23 2008, 05:14 PM Joannnnnne ^ I agree with it looking 'painted'. But i... Jun 23 2008, 05:41 PM schizo ^ It's supposed to be a ribbon, actually. That... Jun 23 2008, 06:23 PM Joannnnnne ^ Hahaha I thought a snake was gonna eat it. My du... Jun 23 2008, 06:24 PM schizo Well, now that I'm thinking about it, I actual... Jun 23 2008, 06:32 PM
SharperMyspace QUOTE(schizo @ Jun 23 2008, 06:32 PM) I w... Jun 24 2008, 09:52 AM emberfly ^ Sweeney Todd was the worst movie i've ever s... Jun 23 2008, 06:33 PM Joannnnnne I thought Sweeney Todd was a great movie. Not John... Jun 23 2008, 06:40 PM schizo I thought the movie was fantastic, too. It's a... Jun 23 2008, 06:45 PM emberfly I think you did an incredible job on the birdy Jun 23 2008, 06:47 PM Joannnnnne ^ Well, considering how she's not a profession... Jun 24 2008, 12:58 PM mizzkewl06 this is very well done. i like everything (even th... Jun 24 2008, 02:23 PM emberfly I like the flowers they're perfect. Jun 24 2008, 04:01 PM Joannnnnne Oh, I like it this way! The flowers are a very... Jun 24 2008, 04:05 PM schizo Thanks guys. I'll probably stick with the seco... Jun 24 2008, 04:08 PM Synesthesia The edited version is better than the first. The r... Jun 24 2008, 04:41 PM |
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