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Notes While Listening
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post Jun 12 2008, 11:08 PM
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A dream.
The outline of a green hill,
your red hair plastered against it.
And you wrestled around
Took a spot (right there right there)
As I let words plunge into the weeds.

And lately I’ve been considering birds
and the sounds tiny feet make.
White powder; I’ve never smelled it.
I’ve never woken up and comforted someone.
Not someone so fragile,
so loud when protesting.

But to interrupt whispered notes
and entangled fingers
and hearts, with wailing.
With the assembling of small beds
and circles under eyes.

No. I let my dream fly.
I poured the green hill
Into the tub and it
slipped down down into the drain.
But my words will linger in the air
Hissing and cracking when you’re near.
 
 
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post Jun 20 2008, 02:13 PM
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xoxo_proud   Notes While Listening   Jun 12 2008, 11:08 PM
doiink   that was full of incredible images: I loved the dr...   Jun 18 2008, 03:53 AM
xoxo_proud   Thank you!   Jun 20 2008, 02:13 PM
absinthe   I agree with Betty. Great imagery.   Jun 20 2008, 05:16 PM
xoxo_proud   Thanks! Sorry for saying it so late   Jul 28 2008, 03:39 PM
bluelily   Vast depth and flow. You described one instance wi...   Aug 19 2008, 08:23 PM


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