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MiKKiBOO
post Jun 20 2008, 12:31 AM
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Her Vision Gets Smaller
and it begins to fade to black
as all the memories ran
and the tears she held back
running threw her mind were
things unshared, and things untold
and now her life is beginning to unfold.

She hides herself like a turtle in its shell
she has no one to talk to
and no one to tell.
The most important person to her dissapeared
and as she walked in the dark shadows
a mysterously figure appeared.

It told her to live her life
and dont hold back
but once again her vision turns black
Thinking of the days when she had her Bestfriend..
When everything she started came to an end.
 
 
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*absinthe*
post Jun 20 2008, 12:56 AM
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a mysterously figure appeared.

*mysterious

Tbh, I like the soldier one better. This one's good, too. Everything connects well. thumbsup.gif
 

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MiKKiBOO   END   Jun 20 2008, 12:31 AM
absinthe   QUOTEa mysterously figure appeared. *mysterious T...   Jun 20 2008, 12:56 AM
MiKKiBOO   THANKS(:   Jun 20 2008, 01:20 AM


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