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A summer's morning, friday september 15th
RiddleMeWonders
post Sep 17 2006, 06:31 PM
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I'll paint you a summer's morning
-one that's cool and wet with dew
The grass so green you can smell it
after all they dance and do- the animals
the birds would circle over head
and perch within their trees
And sing a song to wake the world
which brought our traveler to his knees
Quietly the traveler rose
His brow naked til the end of his nose
Chin and mouth capped with a beard of age
walking in a sway of to and fro
The sun still creeping up in the sky
For some time he was silent but
eventually he smiled a deeper smile
And hummed a tune that seemed to grow
The limbs slowly stretched out
in wayn and touched his coat
The fields gleamed a brighter golden as he passed
And as he went he knew
intimate peace had come at last
Only because he welcomed the truth
 
 
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post Jun 17 2008, 07:29 PM
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Ohhh, nicely written. happy.gif thumbsup.gif
 

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RiddleMeWonders   A summer's morning   Sep 17 2006, 06:31 PM
KissMe2408   Wow this is amazing, It really speaks to me, and ...   Sep 21 2006, 09:38 PM
angel_revelation   this has great imagery... it's really amazin...   Oct 1 2006, 09:25 PM
mona lisa   Wow. I agree; wonderful imagery! It's effe...   Oct 1 2006, 11:32 PM
RiddleMeWonders   i'm going to be editing this one up a bit.   Jun 16 2008, 02:02 AM
absinthe   Ohhh, nicely written.   Jun 17 2008, 07:29 PM


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