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 Jun 14 2008, 10:43 PM
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Some of you may remember me. I took your advice & changed from Chewy Productions to Chewy Surprises. It sounds cuter, i think. Anyways, I'm in that stage where I make things that aren't as professional as you guys. Everyone here is pretty much my idol(= Anyways, this is a new site layout I'm putting up soon & i want some advice & opinions before I put it up. I really love the honesty here(=
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Jun 15 2008, 09:36 PM
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I mean its cute, but its extremely busy. The last update you made is a lot better, the words are spaced out and it doesn't seem like theres a ton of things coming at me. The cursive font is a little strange, and the only other thing that I would really really recommend changing is the stroke around the text in the bottom right box.. the links I'm guessing.
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ChewySurprises i want to improve. Jun 14 2008, 10:43 PM
absinthe It's really cute. I think it seems a bit clump... Jun 15 2008, 01:02 AM Relentless IMO, when I look at this. I see "cute-sy... Jun 15 2008, 01:39 AM ChewySurprises thanks for all of the advice.
Yea, I guess it... Jun 15 2008, 08:58 PM ChewySurprises I changed the whole image from 600 x 600 to 700 x ... Jun 15 2008, 09:32 PM ChewySurprises I didn't change much in this one except the st... Jun 15 2008, 09:59 PM absinthe It's better, but i still feel like each part i... Jun 16 2008, 01:13 AM 1angel3 This looks too much of a myspace layout unless tha... Jun 16 2008, 11:56 AM ChewySurprises Actually it is a myspace layout. I'll fix the ... Jun 17 2008, 09:58 AM Saruna I think it looks cool^^ unique style too (: Jun 17 2008, 08:10 PM
Rachel I think it still looks unprofessional because of a... Jun 18 2008, 03:27 AM |
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