Technology Blow Up, Experimental Work Options

[bigtrey90]

Here is my most recent piece. I drew a different concept out on paper and thought of this concept instead. Just improving my creativity and trying styles I have never done. This is not even close to being finish, but would like to know what you think I could improve on.



P.S: The original is much bigger and sharper than what is shown.

EDITED VERSION BELOW!

[venti-anemoi]

Maybe I'm just dumb, but I can't for the life of me figure out what it is/what it's supposed to be. Or if it's even supposed to be anything at all.

That aside, I have to say it looks extremely cool. I also like the smoky bits, and the touches of blue on what may or may not be the main subject of the piece. (Like I said, I'm dumb.)

[moment of revelation coming up]
OHHHH THEY'RE TVS!!! (I think?) haha okay wow now I feel really dumb.

For the white swirly things (not the smoky bits, but the kind of uneven spirals?), I think it would look better if the ends tapered out. Like, if I were in photoshop and had traced the path using the pen tool, I'd stroke the path with a brush using the....... whatsitcalled..... shoot, forgot. There's a checkbox option...... use pressure or something? Anyway, I'd use that, but it might just be a personal preference.

I also like the +'s throughout. They're interesting. XD