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 Jun 22 2004, 10:13 PM
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 pixel hybrid  Group: Member Posts: 6,410 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,081  |
You don't understand.
Can't you see? You're the only one I need. But you keep going a w a y Away from me. Not coming back. Pretending. Ignoring. Being Blind. Took my heart. I want it back. I want it back. How? Just tell me... Tell me 3 words. Because I love you. Love me back. At least talk to me. Pretend you care. But ignore my love. I love you. |
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Jun 23 2004, 04:34 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 521 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,812 |
the word 'away' has an effect on it; it's like concrete poetry. i prefer it over writing narrative poems, etc. because i like creating images by shaping the words into them, rather than attempting to form the words into vivid illustrations into people's minds, because i'm incapable of it. lol. i think i'm good at concrete poetry, and the word 'away' reminded me of it. good poem..i don't like reading love-related poems though. dunno, they seem so..common.
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hybrid Untitled Jun 22 2004, 10:13 PM
hybrid QUOTE(shortie09 @ Jun 23 2004, 5:34 AM)the wo... Jun 23 2004, 02:09 PM dukesoccer07 ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I like that
Very nice kim Jun 23 2004, 02:13 PM hybrid QUOTE(dukesoccer07 @ Jun 23 2004, 3:13 PM)ohh... Jun 23 2004, 04:11 PM Yemmerz Man I feel like that right now. Love sucks butt. J... Jun 23 2004, 04:23 PM shortie09 QUOTE(lilangelgurlpnai @ Jun 23 2004, 2:09 PM... Jun 23 2004, 10:22 PM hybrid QUOTE(shortie09 @ Jun 23 2004, 11:22 PM)okay.... Jun 23 2004, 11:33 PM × JeNi × ehh i can relate >.< nice poem btw =] Jun 25 2004, 02:10 AM
Winter QUOTE(lilangelgurlpnai @ Jun 23 2004, 11:13 A... Jun 25 2004, 08:37 PM |
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