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my poem
pointeitoutx3
post May 14 2008, 02:53 PM
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Tears stream down her face,
She’s wide awake.
She deals with the sarcasm,
She gets put down,
She wants to love him but he gives her no support.
He’s overbearing, yes he is.

She tries to love him,
She really does.
He gets her frustrated.
She forgives him without an apology,
But she will never forget.
The scars will remain, oh yes the scars will remain.
 

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pointeitoutx3   my poem   May 14 2008, 02:53 PM
DoubleJ   I like it.   May 14 2008, 02:56 PM
superstitious   It's simple and straight to the point. Overal...   May 14 2008, 05:39 PM
emberfly   sounds like it could be a song.   May 17 2008, 02:46 AM
pointeitoutx3   thanks for the support guys =) earlier this week w...   May 18 2008, 04:04 PM

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