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emberfly
post Apr 13 2008, 04:06 PM
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Here are some recent creations of mine, please give FEEDBACCKKK. :D

Avatars


Tree
original


My version



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venti-anemoi
post Apr 13 2008, 10:41 PM
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I like the uncolored version of the avatar; the blue one looks kind of monotonous and boring. Plus I like the color of the sky in the uncolored version, and the yellow-orange bit at the horizon.

I kind of like the original version of the tree more; the colors make it more interesting. I don't think your retouched version is bad, though, it's just kind of like.... okay, what's next? I like the moon idea, and I just think if you did more to it, had a certain theme you wanted to work towards, it'd be more interesting. I think that after you've done that, whether or not you make the rain animated won't add or take away very much from the overall graphic. Animated rain is cool, but it can also get boring after a while. If you're willing to do something like animated lightning, though, that'd be awesome. XD

[Okay, I'll shut up now. Sorry for the lecture. >_<]
 

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emberfly   Recent creations   Apr 13 2008, 04:06 PM
aaayotiffany   i like the avatars. i think i like the one thats i...   Apr 13 2008, 04:23 PM
MissHygienic   The colored version of the train tracks is much be...   Apr 13 2008, 04:26 PM
SkyliteX   I like the blue avatar, its nicer on my thoughts L...   Apr 13 2008, 04:26 PM
aaayotiffany   QUOTE(SkyliteX @ Apr 13 2008, 05:26 PM) I...   Apr 13 2008, 04:28 PM
SkyliteX   QUOTE(aaayotiffany @ Apr 13 2008, 04:28 P...   Apr 13 2008, 04:29 PM
doiink   blue rainy version of tree: by having the backgrou...   Apr 13 2008, 04:28 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(doiink @ Apr 13 2008, 04:28 PM) blu...   Apr 13 2008, 04:32 PM
doiink   QUOTE(emberfly @ Apr 13 2008, 02:32 PM) J...   Apr 13 2008, 05:02 PM
doiink   hm I was thinking you could improve the blue versi...   Apr 13 2008, 04:31 PM
aaayotiffany   QUOTE(doiink @ Apr 13 2008, 05:31 PM) hm ...   Apr 13 2008, 04:33 PM
doiink   emberfly, did you notice that if you look closely ...   Apr 13 2008, 04:34 PM
SkyliteX   QUOTE(doiink @ Apr 13 2008, 04:34 PM) emb...   Apr 13 2008, 04:42 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(doiink @ Apr 13 2008, 04:34 PM) emb...   Apr 13 2008, 05:01 PM
emberfly   yes. Do you think it would look better if it was m...   Apr 13 2008, 05:57 PM
dreamstar7   I like the uncolored version of the avatar; the bl...   Apr 13 2008, 10:41 PM
emberfly   new one :)   Apr 13 2008, 10:55 PM
Relentless   ^ LOL. Is that suppose to be a good thing or a bad...   Apr 13 2008, 11:16 PM
heartquasm   What exactly do you want as feedback? It doesn...   Apr 13 2008, 11:50 PM


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