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 Apr 7 2008, 05:52 PM
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 talent on another level  Group: Member Posts: 746 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 475,735  |
This is a experimental piece I'm working on; its an on and off piece. POSITIVE feedback would be nice. If you think I can fix something, please make sure you describe the problem.
 P.S: That's my logo on top of her head.  EDITED VERSION 
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Apr 8 2008, 12:20 AM
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 sang loves hayden. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,373 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,687 |
When I looked at this, I was confused. I was like what the frick, why is her arm displaced, why is that white sqaur-y mirror thing all around there. I was puzzled.
Although, it does look nice and I'm not sure about the brush you used (the white foggy looking one). I agree about the rain drop, it's different but it looks oddly placed and possibly not needed. Also, another thing that probably distracts the viewer is the text. I have no idea what it says. Something "ARR"? It's great your trying to put in creativity, Kudos, but it's not good if it isn't readable. The first word is not visible.. what does it really say? |
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bigtrey90 Experimental Piece Apr 7 2008, 05:52 PM
vintage-toile i really do quite like this actually.
you've p... Apr 7 2008, 05:55 PM bigtrey90 RE: Experimental Piece Apr 7 2008, 06:08 PM vintage-toile im a little confused as to why there is a straight... Apr 7 2008, 06:12 PM bigtrey90 what straight line? Apr 7 2008, 06:14 PM vintage-toile on her arm left arm. i looked closer and there... Apr 7 2008, 06:17 PM bigtrey90 oh, well i'll look into fixing that.
thanks. Apr 7 2008, 06:18 PM emberfly i don't really like that that black+white patt... Apr 7 2008, 10:26 PM
sparrowdust QUOTE(emberfly @ Apr 7 2008, 10:26 PM) i ... Apr 7 2008, 11:30 PM
aaayotiffany QUOTE(emberfly @ Apr 7 2008, 11:26 PM) i ... Apr 8 2008, 12:01 AM emberfly QUOTE(aaayotiffany @ Apr 8 2008, 12:01 AM... Apr 8 2008, 09:40 PM emberfly ^ woah i didn't even see the raindrop. it does... Apr 7 2008, 11:31 PM Kellz This is nice
but the raindrop needs to go.
&... Apr 7 2008, 11:49 PM bigtrey90 it actually says "DARK BEAUTY", but i... Apr 8 2008, 07:49 AM vintage-toile i really would scrap the water droplet. Apr 8 2008, 08:04 AM bigtrey90 lol, i did.
i didn't put the updated version ... Apr 8 2008, 08:19 AM Melie yeah the rain drop should go and you might want to... Apr 8 2008, 10:43 AM agiri I'm not feeling the white haze. It doesn't... Apr 8 2008, 11:17 AM bigtrey90 yeah i erased the white haze and raindrop.
i don... Apr 8 2008, 03:37 PM marielamuneka aww, papa that looks mad nice.. but i feel like it... Apr 8 2008, 05:21 PM bigtrey90 thanks Apr 8 2008, 05:32 PM marielamuneka i liked the white haze. i thought it looked nice.. Apr 8 2008, 05:35 PM bigtrey90 yeah well right now i'm experimenting with dif... Apr 8 2008, 05:59 PM Heathasm i like what u did
but she kind of looks like a poo... Apr 8 2008, 06:01 PM bigtrey90 RE: Experimental Piece Apr 8 2008, 06:06 PM bigtrey90 so demanding. lol Apr 9 2008, 05:16 AM vintage-toile okay, could we stick to constructive critiscism pl... Apr 9 2008, 06:36 AM bigtrey90 i sure will. Apr 9 2008, 01:57 PM |
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