a poem a poem, oh, but what thy name? |
 Jun 21 2004, 08:49 PM
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**name that gives poem away goes here***
every now and then i resort to the old pictures piled away atop dusty shelves. i know your face is out of reach with every step closer i take i can see straight through you my mind still wonders at your name you never knew i felt this way you know i cant take a broken heart you knew i couldnt have been in love with you.. you never gave me my chance you saw straight through my heart that other girl that other love your only hope my only hate the thought of your pain the thought of losing what was never mine i cant stand your happiness your tears kill me your voice.. your voice i am not in love i am not in love i am not in love you cant care for me i cant love you why does my heart deny me why cant i speak the truth i love you so please dont walk away i care for you your raggety old photos ill put them away my shy smile disguised you never knew i cared i cared  please dont laugh 
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Jun 22 2004, 08:18 AM
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 I would anyone laugh? That was heart breaking. So like me... 
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dont test me a poem a poem Jun 21 2004, 08:49 PM
jz1134 very good c u posted on my poem not so much rhymin... Jun 23 2004, 10:45 PM CoLd_FlAmE its a good poem except it doesnt have much rhythm Jun 23 2004, 10:49 PM jz1134 good job again Jun 24 2004, 07:22 PM Mini nice repetition. Jun 24 2004, 07:25 PM Caitlin great job.. i really relate to the poem <3
keep... Jun 24 2004, 08:43 PM x hYpErRoSeY x aw Jun 29 2004, 05:09 PM
sheddingtears Awesome. I can relate to it a lot. Jun 29 2004, 06:30 PM |
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