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is this okay?, i just want some opinions(= i don't care if you're harsh!
ChewyProductions
post Apr 5 2008, 06:11 PM
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iDecay
post Apr 5 2008, 07:14 PM
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I think it looks quite amateur. The font on the top is too thick, and throws it all off. Maybe a lighter color like dark grey would be better? thinner-looking font? The main font is quite annoying, in my opinion. It's legible, but I think you could find a better font to work with. (I'm just not a big fan of most pixel fonts..) I think you should add just a bit more to the background. The colors are nice, though.

This just doesn't really convince me that my friends would be jealous of your layouts.

Does thinner looking font make sense? XD.gif
 
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post Apr 5 2008, 07:17 PM
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QUOTE(tininja @ Apr 6 2008, 01:14 AM) *
This just doesn't really convince me that my friends would be jealous of your layouts.

and hahahaha! depends if you're someone whos like OMG WOW LAYOUTS though cool.gif .
 
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post Apr 5 2008, 07:21 PM
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QUOTE(vintage-toile @ Apr 5 2008, 05:17 PM) *
and hahahaha! depends if you're someone whos like OMG WOW LAYOUTS though cool.gif .

Haha, well to each their own opinion, right? tongue.gif

And I guess I agree with Sally. I couldn't even figure out how to change the anti-aliasing stuff when I was beginning.

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v What? huh.gif
 
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post Apr 5 2008, 07:24 PM
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QUOTE(tininja @ Apr 6 2008, 01:21 AM) *
Haha, well to each their own opinion, right? tongue.gif

to add, im not like that!
 

Posts in this topic
ChewyProductions   is this okay?   Apr 5 2008, 06:11 PM
vintage-toile   im really confused as to what this is! but tha...   Apr 5 2008, 06:14 PM
Synesthesia   It's not too bad, but the bright green and blu...   Apr 5 2008, 06:14 PM
ChewyProductions   I don't want to bother you or anything, but if...   Apr 5 2008, 06:16 PM
vintage-toile   QUOTE(ChewyProductions @ Apr 6 2008, 12:1...   Apr 5 2008, 06:22 PM
aaayotiffany   this is nice but its very bright. try to darken th...   Apr 5 2008, 06:16 PM
Markster   If you're going to use pixel fonts, make sure ...   Apr 5 2008, 06:24 PM
ChewyProductions   okay I darkened the colors (= Sorry I did this bef...   Apr 5 2008, 06:29 PM
ChewyProductions   I'm sorry I'm not good with words. What do...   Apr 5 2008, 06:30 PM
vintage-toile   uhhm definitely better. but the extra "chewy ...   Apr 5 2008, 06:32 PM
ChewyProductions   I hope this is better. It was difficult to flip it...   Apr 5 2008, 06:53 PM
vintage-toile   wow this is actually a lot better well done....   Apr 5 2008, 06:57 PM
aaayotiffany   wow, this came out really good. job well done. :] ...   Apr 5 2008, 07:03 PM
ChewyProductions   I added more changes. Thanks SO much for your help...   Apr 5 2008, 07:12 PM
tininja   I think it looks quite amateur. The font on the to...   Apr 5 2008, 07:14 PM
vintage-toile   QUOTE(tininja @ Apr 6 2008, 01:14 AM) Thi...   Apr 5 2008, 07:17 PM
tininja   QUOTE(vintage-toile @ Apr 5 2008, 05...   Apr 5 2008, 07:21 PM
vintage-toile   QUOTE(tininja @ Apr 6 2008, 01:21 AM) Hah...   Apr 5 2008, 07:24 PM
vintage-toile   firstly: my name is holly. yeah the prickly bush w...   Apr 5 2008, 07:15 PM
salcha4u   It's good for a beginner, really. I guess peop...   Apr 5 2008, 07:19 PM
ChewyProductions   I'm sorry. I am a beginner so what does opaqu...   Apr 5 2008, 07:30 PM
vintage-toile   QUOTE(ChewyProductions @ Apr 6 2008, 01:3...   Apr 5 2008, 07:31 PM
tininja   It's cool. Opaque means really dark. It's...   Apr 5 2008, 07:31 PM
ChewyProductions   imageready I should be using photoshop, but it...   Apr 5 2008, 07:35 PM
tininja   I forgot how Imageready looks like, but it was pre...   Apr 5 2008, 07:38 PM
vintage-toile   okay, well..it's pretty much the same as photo...   Apr 5 2008, 07:39 PM
ChewyProductions   The opacity was on 100%. I don't know what you...   Apr 5 2008, 07:41 PM
vintage-toile   the text looks a bit too blurry now. and glowing d...   Apr 5 2008, 07:42 PM
tininja   I think what you did would look much better if you...   Apr 5 2008, 07:43 PM
ChewyProductions   Sorry I'm taking up so much of your time |x I...   Apr 5 2008, 07:44 PM
ChewyProductions   I think this is final. Thanks for your help again(...   Apr 5 2008, 07:47 PM
marielamuneka   what an introduction though. this is a good entra...   Apr 5 2008, 07:54 PM
salcha4u   Yeah, it's a glow. Since the rest of the text ...   Apr 5 2008, 07:59 PM
ChewyProductions   I'll fix the glow right now. Thanks for tellin...   Apr 5 2008, 08:00 PM
ChewyProductions   I'm sorry! I would fix it, but I'm lea...   Apr 5 2008, 08:02 PM
emberfly   all the images are broken.   Apr 5 2008, 08:52 PM
ChewyProductions   I deleted them off my photobucket. I didn't ev...   Apr 6 2008, 02:27 PM
vintage-toile   QUOTE(ChewyProductions @ Apr 6 2008, 08:2...   Apr 6 2008, 02:35 PM
emberfly   ^ LOL edit //   Apr 7 2008, 10:29 PM


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