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 Apr 5 2008, 06:11 PM
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Apr 5 2008, 06:16 PM
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I don't want to bother you or anything, but if it needs a lot of work do you think you could tell me what I need to work on?
I guess I could darken the font colors. Thanks so much for your advice (: |
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Apr 5 2008, 06:22 PM
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QUOTE(ChewyProductions @ Apr 6 2008, 12:16 AM)  I don't want to bother you or anything, but if it needs a lot of work do you think you could tell me what I need to work on? I guess I could darken the font colors. Thanks so much for your advice (: sorry, i really wasn't specific at all! my bad  basically, you need to move things about a bit. remove that blue bit from the chewy products, i'd say its ruining it. then move the banner bit with chewy productions and all that up to the top, and bring the credit down. so it goes: image. texty stuff. (i like what you've written btw!) credit. now. get the credit, and make it smaller. re-type it if you have to alling it to the right. now put it in the corner. darken the colours a bit. this would be really nice in greys purples and pinks..but i guess that's a bit girly, and i dislike over the top girliness.. but play about with the colours, and definitely move things about a bit. |
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ChewyProductions is this okay? Apr 5 2008, 06:11 PM
vintage-toile im really confused as to what this is! but tha... Apr 5 2008, 06:14 PM Synesthesia It's not too bad, but the bright green and blu... Apr 5 2008, 06:14 PM aaayotiffany this is nice but its very bright. try to darken th... Apr 5 2008, 06:16 PM Markster If you're going to use pixel fonts, make sure ... Apr 5 2008, 06:24 PM ChewyProductions okay I darkened the colors (=
Sorry I did this bef... Apr 5 2008, 06:29 PM ChewyProductions I'm sorry I'm not good with words.
What do... Apr 5 2008, 06:30 PM vintage-toile uhhm definitely better.
but the extra "chewy ... Apr 5 2008, 06:32 PM ChewyProductions I hope this is better.
It was difficult to flip it... Apr 5 2008, 06:53 PM vintage-toile wow
this is actually a lot better well done.... Apr 5 2008, 06:57 PM aaayotiffany wow, this came out really good.
job well done. :]
... Apr 5 2008, 07:03 PM ChewyProductions I added more changes.
Thanks SO much for your help... Apr 5 2008, 07:12 PM tininja I think it looks quite amateur. The font on the to... Apr 5 2008, 07:14 PM
vintage-toile QUOTE(tininja @ Apr 6 2008, 01:14 AM) Thi... Apr 5 2008, 07:17 PM tininja QUOTE(vintage-toile @ Apr 5 2008, 05... Apr 5 2008, 07:21 PM vintage-toile QUOTE(tininja @ Apr 6 2008, 01:21 AM) Hah... Apr 5 2008, 07:24 PM vintage-toile firstly: my name is holly.
yeah the prickly bush w... Apr 5 2008, 07:15 PM salcha4u It's good for a beginner, really. I guess peop... Apr 5 2008, 07:19 PM ChewyProductions I'm sorry.
I am a beginner so what does opaqu... Apr 5 2008, 07:30 PM vintage-toile QUOTE(ChewyProductions @ Apr 6 2008, 01:3... Apr 5 2008, 07:31 PM tininja It's cool. Opaque means really dark. It's... Apr 5 2008, 07:31 PM ChewyProductions imageready
I should be using photoshop, but it... Apr 5 2008, 07:35 PM tininja I forgot how Imageready looks like, but it was pre... Apr 5 2008, 07:38 PM vintage-toile okay, well..it's pretty much the same as photo... Apr 5 2008, 07:39 PM ChewyProductions The opacity was on 100%.
I don't know what you... Apr 5 2008, 07:41 PM vintage-toile the text looks a bit too blurry now.
and glowing d... Apr 5 2008, 07:42 PM tininja I think what you did would look much better if you... Apr 5 2008, 07:43 PM ChewyProductions Sorry I'm taking up so much of your time |x
I... Apr 5 2008, 07:44 PM ChewyProductions I think this is final.
Thanks for your help again(... Apr 5 2008, 07:47 PM marielamuneka what an introduction though. this is a good entra... Apr 5 2008, 07:54 PM salcha4u Yeah, it's a glow. Since the rest of the text ... Apr 5 2008, 07:59 PM ChewyProductions I'll fix the glow right now.
Thanks for tellin... Apr 5 2008, 08:00 PM ChewyProductions I'm sorry!
I would fix it, but I'm lea... Apr 5 2008, 08:02 PM emberfly all the images are broken. Apr 5 2008, 08:52 PM ChewyProductions I deleted them off my photobucket.
I didn't ev... Apr 6 2008, 02:27 PM vintage-toile QUOTE(ChewyProductions @ Apr 6 2008, 08:2... Apr 6 2008, 02:35 PM emberfly ^ LOL
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