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 Mar 29 2008, 03:53 AM
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 (′ ･ω･｀)  Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477  |
its a vexel. and it looks awkward.
i've never done better so i can say this is my best work  excuse me for the background, i rushed it. there is a full view here and it looks much better.  hmm. about 300+ layers. i've unchecked some and i havent counted. i've been on and off of this and im just glad to get it finish before it rots. mods: i know i have this somewhere D: but pleasepleaseplease, its a month old and i dont wanna bump it just to review how badly i've done. bear with me please? |
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Mar 29 2008, 12:46 PM
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 Resource Center Tyrant Group: Official Member Posts: 2,263 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,306 |
It's pretty good. I can't really assess your skill if I've seen nothing else from you. However, it looks pretty 2D. I think you were going for as realistic as you can, so doing more shadows to give the cherries depth would have made this better.
The dark shadow bothers me, as well. It's sharp, and it would be better being blended in more. The other thing that bothers me is that the cherry in the front has blurred outer lines. There's no real clear end to the cherry, and it throws me off. The shadows you have now are decent, but the cherry in the background looks as if it has a bruise. You know, like it's been injured, and now it has a blood clot. I would soften and perhaps expand that red part. I would even choose a lighter color. You did well with the cherry in front; more work should be done in the background cherry. |
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Apr 1 2008, 05:18 AM
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(′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
QUOTE(MissHygienic @ Mar 30 2008, 01:46 AM)  It's pretty good. I can't really assess your skill if I've seen nothing else from you. However, it looks pretty 2D. I think you were going for as realistic as you can, so doing more shadows to give the cherries depth would have made this better. The dark shadow bothers me, as well. It's sharp, and it would be better being blended in more. The other thing that bothers me is that the cherry in the front has blurred outer lines. There's no real clear end to the cherry, and it throws me off. The shadows you have now are decent, but the cherry in the background looks as if it has a bruise. You know, like it's been injured, and now it has a blood clot. I would soften and perhaps expand that red part. I would even choose a lighter color. You did well with the cherry in front; more work should be done in the background cherry. thanks for the advices, they're extremely helpful. |
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doughnut CHERRIES Mar 29 2008, 03:53 AM
xxk Wow, those look awesome! :thumpsup:
The shad... Mar 29 2008, 11:53 AM Melie this looks outstanding!!! Mar 29 2008, 11:57 AM danceeNAKED Oh mee god! it's booty-ful.
but shit i c... Mar 29 2008, 12:00 PM
Markster QUOTE(MissHygienic @ Mar 29 2008, 10:46 A... Mar 29 2008, 02:22 PM ms-jojo I thought the cherries look delicious. But then I ... Mar 29 2008, 02:41 PM ForgiveTheSinner I want to eat it.
It's way better than what I... Mar 29 2008, 03:57 PM karmakiller I think it's wonderful. Kudos on the details. Mar 29 2008, 04:41 PM bijou I think it's beautiful. How long did it take? ... Mar 30 2008, 02:42 PM Synesthesia I think this is great for your first try, and I do... Mar 30 2008, 02:54 PM taintedangel I love seeing how much progress you've made wi... Apr 1 2008, 01:35 AM Relentless It's extremely amazing! Apr 1 2008, 01:43 AM twilightsamurai i like it. haha, it looks time-consuming. i think ... Apr 1 2008, 07:00 PM SilentLaugh this is great
i remember your last one
i agree w... Apr 1 2008, 07:04 PM
emberfly I should you should have done RED cherries with PI... Apr 4 2008, 09:42 PM |
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