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the rain, =-o
dont test me
post Jun 21 2004, 08:54 PM
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i wrote this one in 6th grade...... stubborn.gif i am not happy with myselfe.



the rain

it keeps me up at night

a fever busting through

thrown among a crashing storm

bleeding icey drops of tears

frozed in the dense cold

atoss a freakish smile

ghastly pounding in my head

a glance above

a hideous breaze

to the ground

the rain

it keeps me up at night
 

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dont test me   the rain   Jun 21 2004, 08:54 PM
nas   "a fever busting through thrown among a crash...   Jun 21 2004, 10:13 PM
Winter   I love the part 'bleeding icey drops of tears...   Jun 22 2004, 08:17 AM


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