What should I do with this? |
 Mar 27 2008, 09:52 AM
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I made this the other day, and I think I want to make it into a myspace div somehow. I don't know what else to add it though? I'm having a creative block or something
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Mar 27 2008, 02:04 PM
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GD. <3 Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,222 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 198,566 |
I like the lines much better at the lower opacity. Fits better.
Anyway, a couple more comments, I'm not sure that the text positioning and effect you used were the best for this image, and I'm not feeling the white textareas. In terms of making it feel more like a layout, I think what you're missing is a center focus since your blend is so continuous. I'd try maybe adding a cut out of a flower overlayed in with some text (name of your site, layout name, etc). If you take a look at some other websites, you'll see what I mean. |
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GunsNRachel What should I do with this? Mar 27 2008, 09:52 AM
agiri this is quite a nice blend.
i'd say it was d... Mar 27 2008, 11:28 AM GunsNRachel Thanks. You we're right about the opacity thin... Mar 27 2008, 11:52 AM mizzkewl06 i really like this graphic, both the orginal and t... Mar 27 2008, 12:57 PM GunsNRachel Alright, I'll work on that.
Innn the mean tim... Mar 27 2008, 02:43 PM vintage-toile mm i agree to move the font about a little.
and th... Mar 27 2008, 04:07 PM GunsNRachel I have no idea what to use for the font. I was thi... Mar 27 2008, 05:01 PM vintage-toile this font does work, its very nice and...vogue?
bu... Mar 27 2008, 05:19 PM
agiri I'm going to close this since I see you've... Mar 28 2008, 05:49 PM |
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