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[monstrum]

I made this for Sanjee/the-vampires-song. Nothing special, but something about it dissatisfies me (maybe the textures), so comments and opinions are welcome. Don't bruise me too badly though : ( - my skills aren't very great.

EDITED: click HERE to see the revised version. Let me know how this one is : ). And to specify before I'm bombarded, I soften all the sharpened parts of the images, especially the right side (thanks to everyone's advice) and I brought down the opacity on the eyes.



This post has been edited by asphyxiated: Mar 23 2008, 09:58 PM

[freeflow]

I'm thinking it's the textures too, something oddly looks really weird about it to me. I think it's more of the right side. And then the areas where the color come on seem a tiny bit odd too. I hate to use the word "odd" and not get into more detail , but not sure how to describe it. Maybe less texture and more of the images you're using? Something else to go on the right hand side? Not sure but the text and colors are ok IMO.