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 Mar 19 2008, 11:16 PM
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advice? opinions? i want as much help as possible (= |
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Mar 19 2008, 11:19 PM
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I'll do this in list-form, so the technical terms won't be an obstruction.
1.) Too much glow on "Dream." It's almost a distraction from the image, and pictures tell a lot more than huge text. 2.) The pixel font at the top is blurry and should be of higher quality and more crisp. 3.) I'm not feeling the image itself. I don't really know what you did to it other than adjust brightness/contrast levels and added some subtle background with "dream" all over it. |
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Mar 19 2008, 11:22 PM
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QUOTE(MissHygienic @ Mar 19 2008, 11:19 PM)  I'll do this in list-form, so the technical terms won't be an obstruction. 1.) Too much glow on "Dream." It's almost a distraction from the image, and pictures tell a lot more than huge text. 2.) The pixel font at the top is blurry and should be of higher quality and more crisp. 3.) I'm not feeling the image itself. I don't really know what you did to it other than adjust brightness/contrast levels and added some subtle background with "dream" all over it. thanks! okay so lower the glow pixel should be more visible? um wow i didn't think you could see the dream all over it lol im gonna go edit this and if you're not too busy do you think you could give me more help? |
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bobadesigns i need some opinions (= Mar 19 2008, 11:16 PM
emberfly I couldn't see the dream at all. I had to squi... Mar 19 2008, 11:26 PM bobadesigns i didn't do much to it
i lowered the glow
and ... Mar 19 2008, 11:29 PM bobadesigns umm so i was just told to lower the glow
i guess ... Mar 19 2008, 11:42 PM bobadesigns i hope thats better
i got rid of the x's
i go... Mar 19 2008, 11:49 PM bobadesigns thanks so much!!
i'll remember everyth... Mar 20 2008, 12:03 AM emberfly ah the last one is 1000 times better. The credit b... Mar 20 2008, 02:09 PM vintage-toile to be honest the image you've chosen doesn... Mar 21 2008, 08:13 AM
emberfly ^ I agree. Most images that say "dream" ... Mar 21 2008, 01:16 PM |
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