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i need some opinions (=, my favorite "artwork" but i know I need improvement
bobadesigns
post Mar 19 2008, 11:16 PM
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any comments?
advice?
opinions?

i want as much help as possible (=
 
 
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MissHygienic
post Mar 19 2008, 11:19 PM
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I'll do this in list-form, so the technical terms won't be an obstruction.

1.) Too much glow on "Dream." It's almost a distraction from the image, and pictures tell a lot more than huge text.
2.) The pixel font at the top is blurry and should be of higher quality and more crisp.
3.) I'm not feeling the image itself. I don't really know what you did to it other than adjust brightness/contrast levels and added some subtle background with "dream" all over it.
 

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