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emberfly
post Mar 17 2008, 08:46 PM
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I got inspired to make a layout from Lights (singer/artist). You can listen to some of her songs on
her myspace

The layout is here:

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please give me your constructive criticism.


by the way: it's already been rejected stubborn.gif .
 
 
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freeflow
post Mar 17 2008, 10:25 PM
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You should of been told why your layout was rejected. If it wasn't you can PM the person that rejected it and ask them why.

Although I would of rejected the layout as well. your brushes on the layout are way to random.. They are thrown everywhere (which is a style some use) but then they are not occupying space or anything. They just sit there. The picture of the girl is extremely plain there is nothing going on there at all. And you went a little too random. It's like you said "hey aw this stick figure brush is cute, let me throw this here". Try thinking about what you put on your layouts before you do it. The background is a little eh too with the layout. The colors fit but it's just not to appealing. Overall I don't see anything real special about it, and I don't know the exact reason why it was rejected , you can ask the person who rejected it.
 

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