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Mar 16 2008, 12:10 PM
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![]() ![]() ![]() Can someone tell me whats wrong with them? I can understand the snoop one but why the other 2? |
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Mar 16 2008, 12:33 PM
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![]() Kissing for yesterday. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 465 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 569,813 |
"it sucks" isnt useful.
number one: not enough going on. far too simple. appears to be poor quality, perhaps the effects are over done. number two: the shadows on his face aren't working by the way youve presented the layers. make the images softer and add some larger text, perhaps in the bottom left corner. the green doesn't seem to work so well. number three: this one is my favourite. soften the text in the background slightly, so that the opacity is light. the glasses do not work, the brightness of the glasses in comparison to the rest of the image is too bright - a bit like a tooth whitening session gone wrong. so soften this area as well. and the use of the dark blue on the image is too dark. more work needs to be done on all three, that's all. more blending and softening is definitely needed. try to create something a bit different. they look pretty same-old at the moment. make it flow nicely and work into each other. maybe working on just one rather than making three quick banners would work nicer for you? :) x |
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Mar 17 2008, 08:56 PM
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![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
number three: this one is my favourite. soften the text in the background slightly, so that the opacity is light. the glasses do not work, the brightness of the glasses in comparison to the rest of the image is too bright - a bit like a tooth whitening session gone wrong. so soften this area as well. and the use of the dark blue on the image is too dark. more work needs to be done on all three, that's all. more blending and softening is definitely needed. try to create something a bit different. they look pretty same-old at the moment. make it flow nicely and work into each other. maybe working on just one rather than making three quick banners would work nicer for you? :) x «agreed |
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Cartman19x My 3 rejected banners Mar 16 2008, 12:10 PM
tungmyBANANA it sucks. all you did was change the monotone of e... Mar 16 2008, 12:25 PM
Cartman19x Well thanks for being honest ppl..
But I have a q... Mar 16 2008, 12:42 PM
waccoon I don't think anyone would disagree with point... Mar 16 2008, 12:47 PM
vintage-toile uhm.. you're on one!
look on the tutorials... Mar 16 2008, 12:48 PM
MissHygienic Tutorials aren't going to help you if you don... Mar 16 2008, 12:53 PM
Heathasm i dont see anything wrong with them, but photomani... Mar 16 2008, 12:55 PM
Cartman19x Ok..back..IDK what to do with this one...i didn... Mar 16 2008, 02:10 PM
libertie The outline of the guy's head/shoulders is a b... Mar 16 2008, 02:33 PM
Markster Hm. I think your banners need more contrast. Each ... Mar 16 2008, 02:37 PM
OhSoDanny I think the banners need more than font. Do stuff ... Mar 16 2008, 05:20 PM
Melie in your first set, your lupe was almost blended in... Mar 16 2008, 07:12 PM
fameONE You're definitely on the right track with the ... Mar 17 2008, 03:00 AM
SkeleBoy You're definitely on the right track.
You just... Mar 17 2008, 07:11 PM
freeflow Too much texture on some of them and the fonts don... Mar 17 2008, 10:27 PM
Cartman19x Any Improvement? Mar 18 2008, 11:05 AM
emberfly QUOTE(Cartman19x @ Mar 18 2008, 10:05 AM)... Mar 18 2008, 11:57 PM![]() ![]() |