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My 3 rejected banners
Cartman19x
post Mar 16 2008, 12:10 PM
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Can someone tell me whats wrong with them?

I can understand the snoop one but why the other 2?
 
 
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SkeleBoy
post Mar 17 2008, 07:11 PM
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You're definitely on the right track.
You just need to accent the guys in them, since they're the focal point.
Cuz the way you have it, they get kinda lost.
You just need to do something to make them stick out a bit more from the rest of the banner. Escpecially the Lupe Fiasco one.
He really gets lost under the green gradient.
The Snoop Dogg one just needs to be reworked a little bit, since he's the only thing on the banner.
And The Kanye one is definitely on its way, you just need to make him stick out from the background a bit more, cuz the blue gradient almost blends him right in.
 

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Cartman19x   My 3 rejected banners   Mar 16 2008, 12:10 PM
tungmyBANANA   it sucks. all you did was change the monotone of e...   Mar 16 2008, 12:25 PM
vintage-toile   "it sucks" isnt useful. number one: not...   Mar 16 2008, 12:33 PM
emberfly   QUOTE(vintage-toile @ Mar 16 2008, 12...   Mar 17 2008, 08:56 PM
Cartman19x   Well thanks for being honest ppl.. But I have a q...   Mar 16 2008, 12:42 PM
waccoon   I don't think anyone would disagree with point...   Mar 16 2008, 12:47 PM
vintage-toile   uhm.. you're on one! look on the tutorials...   Mar 16 2008, 12:48 PM
MissHygienic   Tutorials aren't going to help you if you don...   Mar 16 2008, 12:53 PM
Heathasm   i dont see anything wrong with them, but photomani...   Mar 16 2008, 12:55 PM
Cartman19x   Ok..back..IDK what to do with this one...i didn...   Mar 16 2008, 02:10 PM
libertie   The outline of the guy's head/shoulders is a b...   Mar 16 2008, 02:33 PM
Markster   Hm. I think your banners need more contrast. Each ...   Mar 16 2008, 02:37 PM
OhSoDanny   I think the banners need more than font. Do stuff ...   Mar 16 2008, 05:20 PM
Melie   in your first set, your lupe was almost blended in...   Mar 16 2008, 07:12 PM
fameONE   You're definitely on the right track with the ...   Mar 17 2008, 03:00 AM
SkeleBoy   You're definitely on the right track. You just...   Mar 17 2008, 07:11 PM
freeflow   Too much texture on some of them and the fonts don...   Mar 17 2008, 10:27 PM
Cartman19x   Any Improvement?   Mar 18 2008, 11:05 AM
emberfly   QUOTE(Cartman19x @ Mar 18 2008, 10:05 AM)...   Mar 18 2008, 11:57 PM


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