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Retouch.., lets see if this one's good x_X
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post Feb 24 2008, 03:08 PM
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*thumbed.

i tried again..c&c.
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post Feb 26 2008, 11:40 AM
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Mmmm, I'd say you nailed about 25% of the enhancements.

The lips and mouth in general look better to me in the original (especially the lipstick color), her eyes lost some of the depth in the retouch, her skin lost a lot of the radiance (so play around w. shading the skin and adding light in the right spots), and the skin has a weird color, IMO. I'd also make her laugh lines, and the area around her nose sharper.

(I'm rather picky).

But nice job. :) Keep at it.
 

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chocokissez   Retouch..   Feb 24 2008, 03:08 PM
Markster   I think this is a little better than your previous...   Feb 24 2008, 03:14 PM
taintedangel   The color just seems way too off for me. I like th...   Feb 24 2008, 03:15 PM
supimateecup   It's good, I dunno why but the skin seems kind...   Feb 26 2008, 12:28 AM
xastallaslyons   i think you need to lighten her upper lip or somet...   Feb 26 2008, 06:10 AM
miyashu   the skin looks too perfect; it would help if you l...   Feb 26 2008, 11:01 AM
mandilynne   QUOTE(miyashu @ Feb 26 2008, 11:01 AM) th...   Mar 23 2008, 03:59 AM
vintage-toile   QUOTE(mandilynne @ Mar 23 2008, 08:59 AM)...   Mar 23 2008, 06:59 AM
agiri   Mmmm, I'd say you nailed about 25% of the enha...   Feb 26 2008, 11:40 AM
SkeleBoy   I think what's throwing off the retouched vers...   Feb 26 2008, 07:50 PM
carolannexbh   To me the skin just looks too perfect. Her teeth s...   Feb 27 2008, 06:58 PM
technics   Not bad! Just try to make the skin not so smoo...   Feb 27 2008, 07:57 PM
Freeborn-Kiwi   I like it! but the lips are a bit faded in col...   Mar 23 2008, 08:15 AM
chocokissez   ^i just dimmed them in color a bit because i didn...   Mar 23 2008, 10:28 AM
Freeborn-Kiwi   QUOTE(chocokissez @ Mar 23 2008, 11:28 AM...   Mar 23 2008, 03:00 PM
Drama   i think the lips are better in the first one. i li...   Mar 23 2008, 12:38 PM
1angel3   I would've fix the teeth more. That's what...   Mar 23 2008, 01:41 PM
emberfly   I like the before better =/   Mar 23 2008, 02:09 PM
asphyxiated   The retouched version was smoothed over too much, ...   Mar 23 2008, 02:12 PM


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