Help with these two graphics?, They're backgrounds, I guess... |
 Feb 16 2008, 06:07 PM
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I sent in the castle one but it got rejected, which is completely fine, I would just like to know how to improve. What am I doing wrong? The second one I know most people will think it does not have enough color, but personally I love just two simple colors together. C=
(I wasn't sure how to put these huge pictures on here, so I used Imageshack's thumbnail option....I hope that's alright....)   |
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Feb 23 2008, 02:09 AM
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I like the first one a lot; the colours and concept are attractive. However, like the others have said, I think it's a bit empty. Text would do you some good for that one, and maybe fiddle around with the composition.
The second one...I understand what you're getting at, but it's not very well done. I would have probably just gotten rid of the cutout and text altogether here, since you've got more going on (and these are backgrounds, or desktop wallpapers?) If you're insistent on keeping the cutout, though, I would advise having one that's sharper. This one looks like it's been feathered, and it looks low-quality. The text bothers me, and you've spelled "friendship" wrong as well. Keep working at it, I'm glad you're open to ideas! |
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Feb 23 2008, 10:30 AM
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QUOTE(gigiopolis @ Feb 23 2008, 03:09 AM)  I like the first one a lot; the colours and concept are attractive. However, like the others have said, I think it's a bit empty. Text would do you some good for that one, and maybe fiddle around with the composition. The second one...I understand what you're getting at, but it's not very well done. I would have probably just gotten rid of the cutout and text altogether here, since you've got more going on (and these are backgrounds, or desktop wallpapers?) If you're insistent on keeping the cutout, though, I would advise having one that's sharper. This one looks like it's been feathered, and it looks low-quality. The text bothers me, and you've spelled "friendship" wrong as well. Keep working at it, I'm glad you're open to ideas! Exactly. The first one is nice, its just so empty. The second one feels a bit.. sloppy? Keep working at it though. |
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achimongus Help with these two graphics? Feb 16 2008, 06:07 PM
achimongus Ahh you are right, I had noticed that, and I can... Feb 16 2008, 07:08 PM MissHygienic I reviewed your Castle one, and like I said in my ... Feb 16 2008, 07:16 PM karmakiller Honestly, I don't think there's much wrong... Feb 16 2008, 07:34 PM achimongus Ahh for the first one, I've never been much of... Feb 16 2008, 07:49 PM dreamstar7 For the castle one, the boardwalk looks like it... Feb 21 2008, 02:57 PM
Drama add some boats or something to the 1st
and add ju... Mar 2 2008, 12:58 AM |
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