Help with these two graphics?, They're backgrounds, I guess... |
Help with these two graphics?, They're backgrounds, I guess... |
Feb 16 2008, 06:07 PM
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![]() Nepenthe ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 47 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 347,414 |
I sent in the castle one but it got rejected, which is completely fine, I would just like to know how to improve. What am I doing wrong? The second one I know most people will think it does not have enough color, but personally I love just two simple colors together. C=
(I wasn't sure how to put these huge pictures on here, so I used Imageshack's thumbnail option....I hope that's alright....) ![]() ![]() |
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Feb 21 2008, 02:57 PM
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![]() torn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,718 |
For the castle one, the boardwalk looks like it's leading.... kind of to the right of the castle, not directly to it? I guess that's the perspective/proportion thing. I don't really like the yellow stain (?) brushes on top of everything; to me, it doesn't fit with the rest of the wallpaper.
A really easy way to make the bottom right part seem not so empty would be to add text (maybe something in black on a soft light layer, if you're using photoshop?). Or, since you have birds in the upper right area, you could add ducks or something in the bottom right area. But you don't want to completely fill up the that area, because people still want space to put their icons and everything. I like the birds, by the way. :D In the second wallpaper, the pattern really stands out. It looks pretty sharp. I dunno if that's just my computer screen, because it tends to do weird things to colors and sharpness, but I would suggest maybe lowering the opacity of the pattern? Your focus isn't on the pattern, but on the two people, so following that, maybe you could also lighten the other stuff (the rose and such), or partly desaturate it. Just some ideas. |
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achimongus Help with these two graphics? Feb 16 2008, 06:07 PM
achimongus Ahh you are right, I had noticed that, and I can... Feb 16 2008, 07:08 PM
MissHygienic I reviewed your Castle one, and like I said in my ... Feb 16 2008, 07:16 PM
karmakiller Honestly, I don't think there's much wrong... Feb 16 2008, 07:34 PM
achimongus Ahh for the first one, I've never been much of... Feb 16 2008, 07:49 PM
gigiopolis I like the first one a lot; the colours and concep... Feb 23 2008, 02:09 AM
carolannexbh QUOTE(gigiopolis @ Feb 23 2008, 03:09 AM)... Feb 23 2008, 10:30 AM
Drama add some boats or something to the 1st
and add ju... Mar 2 2008, 12:58 AM![]() ![]() |