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RiddleMeWonders
post Jan 17 2008, 02:39 PM
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In the window of my time
I dwell away as they abide
they, the world
and I, the glow
to be alone, to never grow
to never speak, sing or shine.

While racing on, I still stood
the island, my will is the wood
around me rages the storm I frustrate
for my persistences, again I state
I'll be here till the break,
I wait,
for triumph's awesome feast
They deem me:
to be alone
to never grow
to never speak,
sing,
or shine.
I simply glow and flicker in and out of light.
 
 
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S-Majere
post Jan 17 2008, 03:35 PM
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Fantastic writing - I love how you've put this together and I love the words 'I, the glow' - lovely.
 

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