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 Jan 5 2008, 09:59 PM
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 One Love.  Group: Duplicate Posts: 1,079 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 410,480  |
He said nobody else ever loved him,
That's why he'd get high enough to go touch the heavens above him Vividly remembers every pipe, every needle that stuck him Every alley he ever stepped in, every purse that he snuck in Every level of hell he's been to and the one that he's stuck in The one he can't escape, even though it's of his own construction Maybe you can relate, maybe you're one of those that just doesn't Maybe he doesn't care, loves to allow these demons to come in |
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Jan 13 2008, 11:20 AM
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 CheccMate Foo! Group: Member Posts: 839 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 487,531 |
I respect the honesty of this piece. Can definitely view the harshness through his eyes. Stay real.
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JerzDevil AIYO Jan 5 2008, 09:59 PM
LoveToMySilas Moved to Writing.
Hope you don't mind, I just... Jan 6 2008, 12:04 AM SilentLaugh oh, wow. i love this poem because it has meaning. ... Jan 6 2008, 09:36 PM jaeman Brings a sense of reality in life, I like this one... Jan 10 2008, 06:15 AM
yrrnotelekktric kudos to that.
that was amazing. Jan 14 2008, 09:15 PM |
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