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kristie7
post Jan 4 2008, 10:58 PM
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I wanted to see have my "chopped up I guess": http://www.ccudesigns.com/

Today I was told that it reminded someone of a MySpace page. I really trying to come out of the Webpage habit, but it is how I started out and what I do best. Switching over to websites has been very hard. I thought that I upped it, but now I want redo it, but unsure what would make it look less like a webpage and more like a website. I do not have Flash or Dreamweaver, so I do everything in Photoshop and do the coding myself.

So, yeah take it away. I am a student still so critique is always a good thing. I just look at some designers website and I want something like that, but I guess practice makes perfect!

I have already been told I should: uss xhtml and change the green on my website
 
 
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MissHygienic
post Jan 4 2008, 11:46 PM
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It reminds me of contemporary art; everything about this layout is blaring at me because it's so neon-like. The colors don't mix well. Have you thought about experimenting with different shades of blue and green? Or just orange and green? You should pick a layout style that is easy on the eyes of your audience and that it doesn't suit just only you.

This certainly isn't the most appealing layout to me, especially if you're planning on using it as a website to host designs, or something or another. You should fill up all of the white space with a softer color.

The font is also blaring and harsh, I would change the font to a more subtle, less goofy font.
 

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