ohio state ...thing Options

[xblast196]

this is only my second attempt at something like this, so constructive critisicsm would be fantastic.

[nothing_plus_thi...]

i'm not sure it's really "too much red" so much as it is too many different hues of red.

the background is more pink than red, the text is a darker version of the same kind of more-pink-than-red colour, and the uniforms in the photos are a brighter and truer red (more on the orange side than the blue side of a standard colour palette). it makes for a pretty messy looking final product.

if you had kept the same hue throughout, and changed the shades of it, it would have come out much better. even with that amount of red.

(note: i'm rusty on my art vocabulary so if i screwed up hues and shades and junk, oops. you get the idea.)