Children's book, Honors English III |
 Nov 23 2007, 10:53 PM
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 AMITY  Group: Member Posts: 30 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,170  |
Okay, so at my school in my English class we have to make a children's book, that we will read to preschoolers. What do you think? I know it's very bad quality pictures, but you get the idea.
 by: Amity Lane  Are you ready to learn about some cool shapes? I sure am!  What shape is this? It’s a circle, like buttons and tires!  What shape is this? It’s a funny looking oval, lie an egg or a gem!  What shape is this? It’s a square, like a box or this book!  What shape is this? It’s a diamond, it’d like a piece of jewelry!  What shape is this? It’s a rectangle, this looks like a flag!  What shape is this? It’s a heart, you use this to show your love!  What shape is this? It’s a triangle, it looks like a Christmas tree or some pizza!  What shape is this? It’s a star, you see them in the sky at night!  What shape is this? It’s a crescent, It looks like a banana or the moon!  What shape is this? It’s got a hard name, octagon, it looks like a stop sign!  What is your favorite shape? Mine is a heart.  We see these shapes everyday! What kinds of shapes do you see now?  I see a . . . circle, an oval, a square, a diamond, a rectangle,  A heart, a triangle, a star, a crescent, and an octagon. . . -- These are all the shapes we learned about today! 
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Nov 24 2007, 11:47 AM
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 That's what she said. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,559 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,200 |
I agree, as simple as you guys make it for them to learn it seems better suited for kindergarten or first graders. But hey, kids are getting smarter and smarter every day, so why not give it a shot. I found a few spelling mistakes but I'm not sure if you already fixed them or not. Overall, still very cute.
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Nov 24 2007, 11:52 AM
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AMITY Group: Member Posts: 30 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,170 |
QUOTE(Moderator @ Nov 24 2007, 11:47 AM)  I agree, as simple as you guys make it for them to learn it seems better suited for kindergarten or first graders. But hey, kids are getting smarter and smarter every day, so why not give it a shot. I found a few spelling mistakes but I'm not sure if you already fixed them or not. Overall, still very cute. Spelling mistakes is okay. I have it typed out on the page, just for on this board I quickly typed them up again, because I couldn't get the words in the pictures I took. So, it's all spelled correctly in the actually thing. Thanks though! And I feel like I went out a little bit with the octagon and crescent, I don't remember learning baout them as a pre-schooler so . . . we'll see.
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cheerios Children's book Nov 23 2007, 10:53 PM
aestheticYOU Aww, I think it's perfect. Great job. You hit ... Nov 23 2007, 10:56 PM cheerios Aww, thanks hun! After spending 10+ hours on i... Nov 23 2007, 11:03 PM MissHygienic You've covered everything I learned in my year... Nov 23 2007, 11:19 PM aestheticYOU Geez, 400 points. My finals aren't even worth ... Nov 23 2007, 11:30 PM RogueVanity Wow this is really cute! I can really imagine ... Nov 23 2007, 11:39 PM cheerios Thanks you guys. And, I was just looking at the p... Nov 24 2007, 10:05 AM RockItStudios holy damn. that's awesome.
i have to do the s... Nov 24 2007, 11:09 AM cheerios It seems like it would be easier for first graders... Nov 24 2007, 11:27 AM
Just_Dream At least you didn't put in heptagon. I remembe... Nov 28 2007, 07:02 AM |
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