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 Jun 17 2004, 01:27 PM
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Heres another poem that many of my classmates liked in my 9th grade language class
TEDDY BEAR I sit on the shelf Waiting to be bought Watching little kids That must have thought "I want the stuffed bear, I want that bear now. I dont want stupid beads to put in my hair All i want is that stuffed bear!" Their moms look at the price tag As their face gets disgusted As they walk away mad their child angry But then i saw her The one that would buy me As she walked over and said "I want that one, Daddy!" The man reaches up and grabs my box Brings me to the check out counter And then hands the later 50 bucks Im placed in a bag Knowing i have an owner Then out of the store I know the search is over. -Nicole |
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Jun 17 2004, 01:57 PM
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That works too
 I liked mine...
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NicolynnCat Teddy Bear Jun 17 2004, 01:27 PM
Yemmerz Aww thats cute. But $50 for a teddy bear is a... Jun 17 2004, 01:44 PM NicolynnCat expensive fabric tho the bears made out of...:) Jun 17 2004, 01:50 PM Yemmerz I think it should be retitle as, "Expensive [... Jun 17 2004, 01:54 PM NicolynnCat o haha!it could be a Burberry Bear! haha..... Jun 17 2004, 01:56 PM NicolynnCat haha! burberry is still cute tho..haha! Jun 17 2004, 03:40 PM
Winter Aww how cute. I love teddy bears! Jun 19 2004, 12:37 AM |
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