untitled?, ehh.first attempt at poetry. |
 Sep 7 2007, 06:15 PM
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and for her its been a thousand years
shes been looking at the top of the mountain, always from the bottom literally and in fantasy. a taste of what it used to be would only be enough if only she could remember what it was like on that rock. strokes on the carpet heard, seen, felt. can it be like strokes on a cigarette? innocence taken without much. a semester changes everything she had. mistakes made, not to be fixed. and watching him ahead of her it only made sense on that mountain. while her and others were climbing, looking up was all it had ever been. |
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Sep 30 2007, 01:34 AM
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 Don't worry guys, size doesn't matter...to lesbians Group: Member Posts: 2,444 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,066 |
I love how you named your 1st attempt untitled...like everyone else
im guilty of this too |
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ladycrusader.14 untitled? Sep 7 2007, 06:15 PM
Dreamers Pretty cool, especially for a first attempt Sep 8 2007, 10:38 AM RogueVanity First attempt? That's pretty good
I like how... Sep 22 2007, 04:54 AM jammylise Damn...that's wow....good job.
i wanna see mo... Sep 22 2007, 05:13 AM
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