untitled?, ehh.first attempt at poetry. |
 Sep 7 2007, 06:15 PM
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and for her its been a thousand years
shes been looking at the top of the mountain, always from the bottom literally and in fantasy. a taste of what it used to be would only be enough if only she could remember what it was like on that rock. strokes on the carpet heard, seen, felt. can it be like strokes on a cigarette? innocence taken without much. a semester changes everything she had. mistakes made, not to be fixed. and watching him ahead of her it only made sense on that mountain. while her and others were climbing, looking up was all it had ever been. |
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Sep 22 2007, 05:13 AM
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 I am not afraid, I was born for this. Group: Official Member Posts: 805 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 565,063 |
Damn...that's wow....good job.
i wanna see more of your writing. make sure your post more |
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ladycrusader.14 untitled? Sep 7 2007, 06:15 PM
Dreamers Pretty cool, especially for a first attempt Sep 8 2007, 10:38 AM RogueVanity First attempt? That's pretty good
I like how... Sep 22 2007, 04:54 AM
ParanoidAndroid I love how you named your 1st attempt untitled...l... Sep 30 2007, 01:34 AM |
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