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Elleusion
post Aug 14 2007, 06:22 PM
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I haven't made anything for a couple months so I decided I'd try

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I really hate the font...
 
 
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*davinci*
post Aug 14 2007, 08:51 PM
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I haven't seen you around in a while! :)

I think it's too crowded. Leaving some background space empty isn't a bad thing. When I first saw it, I thought, where do I look first? Where's the focal point? 'Want a ride?' should be bigger than 'AG Production'. The white background in the punch label font diverts the eyes away from the rest of the image, which is primarily black. It's too visible. There's also the green-ish tint on the left and vertically around the middle. I think you're a little rusty. =\
 

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