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shorty_d09
post Aug 7 2007, 08:43 PM
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so i have been trying to steer away from my typical style of blends.
so can u guys tell me how i am doing.
and what i can do to improve.














 
 
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jessicaesthetic
post Aug 7 2007, 09:18 PM
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I second Relentless' comment.
The first Ashlee one is my favorite, but the font... While it is a fun font, the way it's used doesn't look professional. There's too much space between the lines of text and it just doesn't flow with the blend/texture.

The Avril one has lots of potential. A different font, smaller font size for the lyrics, and some more brush work/textures.

The second Ashlee one doesn't make sense. Some of it's grayscale, some of it is full color. I don't think the texture works with that image. The font does not match at all. Color, drop shadow, or face.

I think you should focus on making the fonts work with the blends. On the JLo one, the "hold it..." drop shadow's distance is too far off from the text, and the font is thin, so the drop shadow probably shouldn't be so opaque. The "JLo" text doesn't even have a drop shadow, though. Consistency is good.

The font you used for "Jessica Simpson" / "Christina Aggi" is not the right size or color in any of the images. A different anti-aliasing method may help that, too.

sorry I wrote a novel :/
 

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