Cheesy Break-up Poem., true story, unfortunately. |
 Aug 1 2007, 11:11 PM
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Aug 2 2007, 07:36 AM
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 Lets value our lives. Group: Official Designer Posts: 235 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 478,298 |
You tell me that it’s over, I guess it’s for the best. It only hurts me when Im sober, I never would’ve guessed That I’d miss what we could’ve been and what I’ve never really had. Now all I can do is sit and watch, the Good in life go bad. I miss what you were to me and the way you made me feel But after all that’s been ,said and done, I don’t think it was real. You dropped me in a minute, It didn’t take very long. I think of what you’ve put me through, and know I can move on. I added some punctuation thingies.. QUOTE Good in life go bad I didnt really get this one the first time I read it, so I suggest something to clarify the meaning of good in this. thats really sad :[ |
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temporary-insanity-xo Cheesy Break-up Poem. Aug 1 2007, 11:11 PM
GEEZYBABY nice. i like. Aug 2 2007, 01:05 AM LadyXTor aww! I love it! Aug 2 2007, 04:50 AM sourire I like it. You keep a nice beat throughout the po... Aug 2 2007, 11:56 AM dispn0ygonekrazy pretty koo, I use to write stuff like this a lot, ... Aug 2 2007, 12:55 PM pinacoolada It's not cheesy XD
Nice job. =] Aug 18 2007, 08:59 AM
xFaith That's really nice =) I like it alot^^ Aug 18 2007, 09:40 AM |
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