VECTOR // Reborn Options

[xtrancie]

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The quote looks like the kind of font mix-up that a little girl would use on her pink, sparkly Myspace. I don't know; just the fonts used and the way it looks. And I don't like Century Gothic anyway, for that reason. It just reminds me of inexperience with graphics (not that it is you; just a reminder). The cross could have been photoshopped a bit with lighting techniques and whatnot because it looks sort of cut out. The orange stripes were very creative, but you can tell that you just used that one shape and made it smaller and bigger and stuff. You should have rotated it once in a while a slight bit so it actually looked like it was draping over the bodies. Your vectoring skills are great though; I love the idea. The "sky" looks really cool, and I like how the girl (?) in the middle is the only one with defined clothes.

[xtrancie]

The quote looks like the kind of font mix-up that a little girl would use on her pink, sparkly Myspace. I don't know; just the fonts used and the way it looks. And I don't like Century Gothic anyway, for that reason. It just reminds me of inexperience with graphics (not that it is you; just a reminder). The cross could have been photoshopped a bit with lighting techniques and whatnot because it looks sort of cut out. The orange stripes were very creative, but you can tell that you just used that one shape and made it smaller and bigger and stuff. You should have rotated it once in a while a slight bit so it actually looked like it was draping over the bodies. Your vectoring skills are great though; I love the idea. The "sky" looks really cool, and I like how the girl (?) in the middle is the only one with defined clothes.

lol agreed with almost everything. except the bold part it was actually done strand by strand =). thanks for criticism. Lol. about the font, century gothic is actually my favorite font (you see them in everything i made) XD. the changed of font was meant to emphasize certain line. =) ^-^ thanks again.