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 Jun 5 2007, 07:46 PM
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crayons and swing sets
hide and go seek the sounds of youth fading from our ears like a long lost hello a moment - it's gone a new beginning car keys and credit cards taking over and trying to consume but we blaze on with splendor creating our own world of extravagance finding our luster and defining our future |
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Jun 19 2007, 02:34 PM
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QUOTE taking over and trying to consume I'm not sure why I feel like this doesn't fit very well... QUOTE but we blaze on with splendor creating our own world of extravagance I love this quote. Overall, I think it's very good. 
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rawrhallelujah growth Jun 5 2007, 07:46 PM
UniversalRoyalty I like it.
The last two lines of each stanza reall... Jun 5 2007, 10:47 PM rawrhallelujah ah
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it took me a surprisingly long time to g... Jun 13 2007, 12:55 PM tilanguyenar What about these?:
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cherry90 QUOTE(rawrhallelujah @ Jun 6 2007, 01:46 ... Jun 25 2007, 09:03 AM |
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