He is Justice (MySpace), L - Death Note DIV layout Options

[frzn-lilyv]

Hey everyone! (: Dang, so sorry that it's been awhile I posted or gave something in Createblog. Forgive me? ;_;

I keep seeing Bleach and Raito layouts, so I wanted to post an L one. :'D

Anyway, I made a DIV layout and I want some feedback on it from you lovely designers before putting it up on my main one to show my friends (the myspace is linked to my main one, so feel free to add me - but Message me first to let me know you're from CB!).

Please please? :D

MySpace

EDIT - Thank you to those who comment & gave some compliments & suggestions! I really appreciate this! ;_;

I'm a little wordy so maybe it's a lil too cluttered? D: Credits are at the bottom too! :"D

&If you wish to add/question me about anything, let me know.

^^ Thanks and much love to CB for keeping it real. (:

[frzn-lilyv]

@Maestro - Kya! Thank you so much! x'3 You're too kind. ;; There's just a whole different skill when someone grades it by numbers, rather than words. Since you're the first one grading it by the numbers, it totally hit me. :D Thanks again!

@Synesthesia - LOL. Yeah! I wanted to show that Death Note doesn't have to be all angst with its dark colors. (: ---OMG. ME TOO. If ever you find those chibi L figurine(s), lemme know! xD !! Thanks for the compliments! ^^

@Digitalfragrance - OMG. Thanks so much for the compliment. Your words really inspire me especially with your awesomeness as a graphic designer.

Hm... "blurry or out of place?" I think its blurry because it was meant for a small font (I used silkscreen). But I thought it was good to emphasize one of his quotes, rather than use the same font and style with his other quotes in the layout.

Concerning the "out of place," originally, I put the quote in the center of "He is Justice" rather than the side as it is now. But I thought it was too cluttered in the left side with the darker quotes... and the right side was empty...

But shall I make it smaller and move it?

& finally, about the horizontal bar, I was honestly concerned about those who use the 1024x768. I put "overflow: x-hidden;" (originally it was overflow-x:hidden;}" Hopefully, is it gone? Are you using IE or Mozilla (just wondering)?

So sorry to bother you and thank you so much for your honest creative criticisms. :D



:D Thanks for giving me your overall input (& help!) :)