untitled. poem., it`s the first i`ve really written in a while. |
untitled. poem., it`s the first i`ve really written in a while. |
Apr 3 2007, 12:29 PM
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![]() [BRITT;;] ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 764 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 433,210 |
yeah, idk.
april 1, 2007 my breathing is stopping so is my heartbeat my body`s giving up but maybe i don`t care my tears have ran out but my blood hasn`t an it still keeps pouring and maybe it`s satisfying because it honestly doesn`t hurt i`m too numb to feel what might hurt anyone else i disgusts myself every breath i take is like inhaling poison but it doesn`t kill me i wish it would |
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RiddleMeWonders the question we ask afterward is, "why?... Apr 3 2007, 02:06 PM
Brittany Rachelle hm, thanks. i was expecting
worse critique on this... Apr 6 2007, 07:11 PM![]() ![]() |