Kissing the Lipless {div} Options

[xoxo_proud]

changed layout

like?

[falsetigerlimbs]

I really, really like this layout. I love the header graphic, and I love the choppiness of it.

I actually love how there's all the blank space, and how everything seems to just be scattered around.

It seems like you're just putting out random thoughts about yourself with no structure, and I like it. It's almost poetic, to me at least. I love styles of writing that have no structure, that are based around incomplete sentences and scattered thoughts. ;)

I don't know if you intended for it to be poetic like that, but that's how it seems to me.

Anyway, the only suggestion I have would be to perhaps make the phrases about yourself a bit more random, to match the layout.

Something like, "I like my eggs sunny side up"
haha ok, well maybe not quite like that... just more unique, random facts than "i love reading" and "i love writing." the layout is spunky, so the facts should have spunk too.

I also think the "i'm quiet at first" should be towards the top.