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[poetwritremokid]

From the day I opened my eyes;
I hated the thought of love and life;
Now with the thought of you;
I can't talk it anymore;
You gave all this CRAP because I am me;
I am sick of you and this thing called L-I-F-E;
The life I have isn't good enough and isn't up to standard for you and now it will be OVER between you and me FOREVER;
You are just so pointless right now;
Judging me like I am some movie or song;
Labeling me;
Chosing what I am even thought you would never know me;
Leave me alone;
Let me be;
I get enough from people like you;
Stairing into space;
Ignoring words;
ITS NOT WORKING;
JUST FORGET I LIVE AND LET ME BE!




just let me be....

[iloveyou1223]

hate to break it to yah hun but..
You have as much talent as my left pinky toenail . I mean seriously how could you write such a thing? It sounds like every other song on the radio or any other emo kid poem. and dont give me that line, "im not emo... Im emotional" its the same thing kid. Stop feeling sorry for yourself and suck it up. and this b.s story you made up about everyone you love trying to commit suicide, friend lost a baby blah blah, come on i bet your like 15. Stop whinning and start writting real poetry if your capable. also check your grammar, last time i checked after every line of a poem there doesnt need to be a semicolon. if you cant handle the criticism on your poetry maybe your just not meant to be a poet. nuff' said