[.Love.Is.Pressious.] Options

[poetwritremokid]

No matter what you say;
No matter what you do;
I will allways love you;
Forever till the end;

Beating hearts;
Blood rushing;
Butterflies;
Day dreams;

This I tell you is love;
Its the end to all pain;
Suffering and torture;
Its you and me;
Just us;

You're more than life;
You're more than love;
You're the center of my heart;
Keeping me alive;

Smiling thoughts;
Laughing memories;
Great times;
Endless;

You are me;
Love, life, hope;
Together forever;
Till life has past;
Just know that I love you;

[bat19]

You see what I mean. This is pleasant. It doesn't make you want to jump off the roof of Wal-Mart when you read it. You should write more stuff like this that is actually enjoyable and stop writing depression, it's not fun. And don't be so damn jumpy when someone criticizes you. Learn to accept that not everyone is going to like your stuff and that you will have to deal with negative criticism.