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*mona lisa*
post Feb 16 2007, 12:08 AM
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PLEASE be harsh. I need criticism.
 
 
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*mona lisa*
post Feb 22 2007, 11:42 PM
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QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ Feb 21 2007, 9:04 AM) *
yay, I love giving critism (before I hurt your feelings, I'd like to say this is amazing Mona =) You really did achieve the minimalistic look)

Crop off the bottom of the picture so there is less red. The image should start where the red and white collide. Or, since its a wallpaper, move the image down so there is more white. right now, there is too much red at the bottom and it doesn't do much for me, and it'll follow the 'rule of thirds' better cropped. Is there anyway you can change all the flowers so they are like the black ones? I really like those :P Finally, I would remove both the clover thats to the right of the biggest one and the one b/w words of the title.

Did you do this all with the pen tool?! wow
Haha, thanks so much! I'll keep the rule of thirds in mind. :)
QUOTE(moorepocket* @ Feb 22 2007, 11:40 PM) *
yeah, how you do it?
Used one brush and the rest was by using the pen tool. :P
 
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post Feb 26 2007, 09:54 AM
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QUOTE(mona lisa @ Feb 22 2007, 11:42 PM) *
Haha, thanks so much! I'll keep the rule of thirds in mind. :) Used one brush and the rest was by using the pen tool. :P

wow, you have so much patient.
 

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mona lisa   releaseme   Feb 16 2007, 12:08 AM
StanleyThePanda   I want to apologize before I say what I am about t...   Feb 16 2007, 12:20 AM
TheSpoon   I think it could do without the smaller clover thi...   Feb 16 2007, 01:37 AM
Duchess of Dork   I don't what to say, Mona... I don't have...   Feb 16 2007, 10:54 AM
EmmalieV   hm , i dont like the white much , real simple....   Feb 16 2007, 12:26 PM
Smoogrish   I don't really feel like the clover things mat...   Feb 16 2007, 12:32 PM
Jeng   Mona don't hate meeeeee, I LOvE THIS, omg. Mon...   Feb 16 2007, 05:30 PM
Sherlock.   The white doo-dads at the bottom should flow with ...   Feb 16 2007, 11:20 PM
moorepocket*   it's really good. I like it a lot.   Feb 17 2007, 12:27 AM
mona lisa   Lol, I guess this teaches me a lesson in minimalis...   Feb 17 2007, 02:44 AM
Mulder   mona, i loveee it! great job!   Feb 17 2007, 07:13 PM
ecargnmyst   its vvery nice and simple..i like it =]   Feb 20 2007, 01:05 PM
mizz_americaz   yay, I love giving critism (before I hurt your fee...   Feb 21 2007, 09:04 AM
moorepocket*   yeah, how you do it?   Feb 22 2007, 11:40 PM
mona lisa   QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ Feb 21 2007, 9:04 A...   Feb 22 2007, 11:42 PM
moorepocket*   QUOTE(mona lisa @ Feb 22 2007, 11:42 PM) ...   Feb 26 2007, 09:54 AM
Gypsy Eyes   Besides what Maryland said, the only thing that st...   Feb 23 2007, 03:25 PM
a beautiful nothing   Ew.... Mona wants harsh criticism, when si...   Feb 24 2007, 12:06 AM
carnelliz2sexy   um its really beautiful nd i kno u want some criti...   Feb 24 2007, 11:33 AM
just_rissa   It so bad! tsk. tsk. sheesh. of course not. It...   Feb 27 2007, 09:56 AM


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