-DeffinitlyDead- Options

[poetwritremokid]

From the day I opened my eyes;
I hated the thought of love and life;
Now with the thought of you;
I can't talk it anymore;
You gave all this CRAP because I am me;
I am sick of you and this thing called L-I-F-E;
The life I have isn't good enough and isn't up to standard for you and now it will be OVER between you and me FOREVER;
You are just so pointless right now;
Judging me like I am some movie or song;
Labeling me;
Chosing what I am even thought you would never know me;
Leave me alone;
Let me be;
I get enough from people like you;
Stairing into space;
Ignoring words;
ITS NOT WORKING;
JUST FORGET I LIVE AND LET ME BE!




just let me be....

[bat19]

you know what dude, I wasnt even going to leave a reply because I didnt think it worth my time. But after the way you attack someone who was just trying to help, you deserve this.

You definitely are Emo. Just admit it. You've been labeled. E-M-O. Every word you've written here is another regurgitation of the work's of others. There is absolutley no originality to this piece, all you're doing is crying. If someone actually wronged you(which I doubt), stop writing poetry and look for someone new. Stop whining about how they hurt you. If I wanted to hear crying, I'd go to the other hundred posts identical to this one.

Also you have absolutely no idea what it means to hate someone. The Jews have real hate for Hitler. You're feelings toward this chick who didn't return your calls after you sent her a scarf with drops of your blood on it is borderline malcontent, nothing more.

And finally if you're sick of life, end it biotch.