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 Jan 28 2007, 11:18 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
morning is dripping,
falling into afternoon like coagulated paint. the day no longer fluid, it stumbles farther out of reach. eyes see reflected emptyness search upward in question and open to answers. swimming, sweeping light in the flood of a cool starry night my heaven sighs to say: your love is like a flash light you turn it on and off when you want seeking something earth can not supply and forget about it when you're "alright" |
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Feb 20 2007, 12:10 AM
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 Oh My Goblet of Fire! Group: Member Posts: 222 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 504,421 |
This is my favourite I've read in the forums! It's so meaningful and delicate. "Your love is like a flash light" is my favourite line. I don't have anything to add except to ask if your grammar is meant for impact or is just random?
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RiddleMeWonders like coagulated paint Jan 28 2007, 11:18 PM
Chessboxxa 101 what does coagulated mean? Feb 2 2007, 09:44 AM RiddleMeWonders clumpy. think of it like when you're scramblin... Feb 2 2007, 03:26 PM JakeKKing It's good. Feb 14 2007, 05:58 AM
RiddleMeWonders What do you mean? Feb 28 2007, 09:09 AM |
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