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 Feb 14 2007, 12:27 AM
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so i was talking to a friend & she asked about how my story was going..to be truthful, i was stuck on it (finishing my work is impossible for me) but then i had this idea. & i talked to her about it. she thought it was a pretty good idea. basically, i'm going to write about a girl who went into a coma. & while she's in it, she 'dreams' about never being in one at all, everything in her life is all the same, but there's someone who she'd fallen madly in love with. 2 years later though she finally wakes up & realizes he was never real.
hah. anyone tell me something they'd like to read about, like, what kind of stories get your attention? |
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Feb 18 2007, 01:28 PM
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Have you considered only revealing to the reader that she's trapped in a coma later on in the story? It would probably make for a good twist and/or could significantly heighten your delivery.
Maybe a bit predictable or cliché, but I'd definitely favor it over recounting the events through her diary. Also, ending it tragically wouldn't be so bad...some might really get a kick out of it. 
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janejumped an interesting story Feb 14 2007, 12:27 AM
The Abominable C-Pillar QUOTE(janejumped @ Feb 14 2007, 1:27 AM) ... Feb 14 2007, 12:47 AM
JakeKKing QUOTE(The Abominable C-Pillar @ Feb 14 2... Feb 14 2007, 05:26 AM The Abominable C-Pillar QUOTE(JakeKKing @ Feb 14 2007, 6:26 AM) D... Feb 14 2007, 11:20 AM xxmisxtakexx How are you going to solve the conflict of her not... Feb 14 2007, 12:46 PM janejumped ^ i haven't thought through it completely. act... Feb 14 2007, 07:58 PM femme_fatale4160 That sounds almost exactly like "Comfort ... Feb 16 2007, 04:13 PM janejumped wow. seriously? -_-i had no idea..well i guess me ... Feb 18 2007, 01:00 PM femme_fatale4160 ^Actually, his idea's not bad.
Yeah, you and ... Feb 18 2007, 07:46 PM Intercourse. I think your idea sounds a bit cliche, Just the wh... Feb 19 2007, 06:58 PM |
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