an interesting story Options

[wishforhelsinki]

so i was talking to a friend & she asked about how my story was going..to be truthful, i was stuck on it (finishing my work is impossible for me) but then i had this idea. & i talked to her about it. she thought it was a pretty good idea. basically, i'm going to write about a girl who went into a coma. & while she's in it, she 'dreams' about never being in one at all, everything in her life is all the same, but there's someone who she'd fallen madly in love with. 2 years later though she finally wakes up & realizes he was never real.




hah. anyone tell me something they'd like to read about, like, what kind of stories get your attention?

[femmefatale4160]

That sounds almost exactly like "Comfort & Joy." It's a novel about this woman who gets in a plane accident and ends up walking away from the wreckage, finding a small town, and falling in love with the owner of the Inn she was staying at. As it turns out, she was actually in a coma and she never met him.

Then she finds out that during her coma, she was the "imaginary" friend of the innkeeper's son. She goes to search for the boy and his father, and then they end up together.

Anyway, I still think that you could have a good story if you add something a little different to the plot, while still keeping the basic concept of the coma/dream in it.